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Reverse this curse

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Literature Text

Look in the mirror

ɹoɹɹıɯ ǝɥʇ uı ʞooן

With broken shards and blood

pooןq puɐ spɹɐɥs uǝʞoɹq ɥʇıʍ

That reflect nothing

buıɥʇou ʇɔǝןɟǝɹ ʇɐɥʇ

But a hurtful truth

ɥʇnɹʇ ןnɟʇɹnɥ ɐ ʇnq
Experimenting with my ''writing'', comments appreciated.


¡noʎ ʞuɐɥʇ
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The simplicity of this poem is what grabbed my attention. Sometimes the least amount of words is often the best. And then you went and added a creative, artistic twist with the reflecting of these few chosen words back to the narrator, but also the reader. Great piece of writing!